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m0le
07-03-2006, 20:13
... sonder ich! :D Könnte kurz wer den Text durchlesen und mir sagen was alles falsch is! Ich bin grad nicht mehr in der Lage da was zu erkennen! :f: Bin scho total fertig! :rolleyes:

der Text

There are many advantages of solar power, for example it does no adversity to nature. Solar power is a clean way to produce energy. Therefore are different forms of constructions, to achieve the highest efficiency. For example the use of photovoltaic cells on roofs in big cities. These cells are able to generate electricity directly from sunlight. Many countries support these ways of energy generation with financial aid. One of the disadvantages of this type is that it’s very expensive and often it’s mostly for low power devices like a calculator.

A system with higher efficiency is the concentrated solar power. This system uses a big parabolic lens, trough or mirror to focus the sunlight on one solar spot or a pipe. This ways are cheaper and more effective than any other system. The major disadvantage of this system is that it must be moveable. That means that is must be adjustable to the sun. Another method, also the cheapest, is the parabolic trough system. This method uses oil, which flows trough tubes. These tubes heated up by the sun and transformed the oil into steam. This steam runs a turbine to produce electricity. Then the steam cools down and runs back to the trough. With this system you can up to 330 MW a year.



danke!

mfg
m0le

andreas999
07-03-2006, 20:30
... sonder ich! :D Könnte kurz wer den Text durchlesen und mir sagen was alles falsch is! Ich bin grad nicht mehr in der Lage da was zu erkennen! :f: Bin scho total fertig! :rolleyes:

der Text
Solar power offers various advantages, for example it does not do any harm to the environment. It is a clean way to produce energy.

Different forms of constructions are currently used, in order to achieve the highest efficiency, e.g. the use of photovoltaic cells on roofs in big cities. These cells are cabable of generating electricity directly from sunlight (sunbeams?).

Several countries support these ways of energy generation with financial aid. One of the disadvantages of this type (system?)is that it’s very expensive and often it’s mostly fo low power devices like a calculator.

A system with higher efficiency is the concentrated solar power. This system uses a big parabolic lens, trough or mirrorhä????? to focus the sunlight on one solar spot or a pipe.

These ways are cheaper and more effective than any other system. The major disadvantage to mentioned concerning this system is that it must be moveable (necessity of mobility?). That means that is must be adjustable to the sun.

Another method, also the cheapest, is the parabolic trough system. This method uses oil, which flows (circulates?)trough tubes.

These tubes are heated up by the sun and transformed the oil into steam. ????

This steam runs a turbine to produce electricity. Then the steam cools down and runs back to the trough. With this system you can up to 330 MW a year.
Satzstellung? Verb?





das wär meine version. ein paar sätze klingen noch ein bisserl holprig.

Mr J.
07-03-2006, 20:45
There are many advantages to solar power, for example it does no adversity to nature (? not harm the environment). Solar power is a clean way of producing energy. There are different forms of construction to achieve the highest efficiency. For example the use of photovoltaic cells on roofs in big cities. These cells are able to generate electricity directly from sunlight. Many countries support these ways of energy generation with financial aid. One of the disadvantages of this type is it’s expensiveness. It’s mostly used for low power devices like calculators.

A system with higher efficiency uses concentrated solar power. It uses a big parabolic lens, trough or mirror to focus the sunlight on one solar spot or a pipe. This is cheaper and more efficient than any other system. The major disadvantage of this system: it has to be moveable so it can be adjusted to the sun. Another method, which is also the cheapest, is the parabolic trough system. This method uses oil, which flows through tubes. The sun heats up these tubes and transforms the oil into steam. This steam powers a turbine which in turn produces electricity. The steam then cools down and runs back to the trough. With this system you can (?achieve) up to 330 MW a year.


Der Rechtsweg ist ausgeschlossen :p

bigair
07-03-2006, 20:46
... sonder ich! :D Könnte kurz wer den Text durchlesen und mir sagen was alles falsch is! Ich bin grad nicht mehr in der Lage da was zu erkennen! :f: Bin scho total fertig! :rolleyes:

der Text

There are many advantages of solar power, for example it does no adversity to nature. Solar power is a clean way to produce energy. Therefore are different forms of constructions, to achieve the highest efficiency. For example the use of photovoltaic cells on roofs in big cities. These cells are able to generate electricity directly from sunlight. Many countries support these ways of energy generation with financial aid. One of the disadvantages of this type is that it’s very expensive and often it’s mostly for low power devices like a calculator.

A system with higher efficiency is the concentrated solar power. This system uses a big parabolic lens, trough or mirror to focus the sunlight on one solar spot or a pipe. This ways are cheaper and more effective than any other system. The major disadvantage of this system is that it must be moveable. That means that is must be adjustable to the sun. Another method, also the cheapest, is the parabolic trough system. This method uses oil, which flows trough tubes. These tubes heated up by the sun and transformed the oil into steam. This steam runs a turbine to produce electricity. Then the steam cools down and runs back to the trough. With this system you can up to 330 MW a year.



danke!

mfg
m0le

perfekt...keine fehler :devil:
....mir geht die alternativ energy schas schon so wohin :wink:

m0le
07-03-2006, 20:49
Der Rechtsweg ist ausgeschlossen :p
das klingt am besten!!! THX!!! :toll: